|
Post by Firestar on Apr 19, 2008 19:52:25 GMT 9
Here Silverstar, you write it the way you want
|
|
|
Post by Silverstar on May 8, 2008 20:05:27 GMT 9
Look theres killshan the shadowclan deputy volepaw hissed in my ear i know who he is volepaw i snapped. Then lets got him come on lizardpaw volepaw moaned. fine i spat and we slunk into a bush killshan stood looking fearless now i heard volepaw hiss and i launched myself out of the bush we rolled in a vicious tuccle with him. Thenl his weight gave away he was falling but he had his teeth embedded firmly in volepaws tail and he dragged volepaw down with him i lunged at volepaws scruff and held on tight i felt myself being pulled down i closed my eyes.
|
|
|
Post by Firestar on May 9, 2008 12:36:16 GMT 9
umm.... silverstar, That is all one sentence... change it now please, or I will have to ban you. (And dont do that thing where you create 20 accounts, I already said no!!!)
|
|
|
Post by Firestar on May 9, 2008 12:37:09 GMT 9
Oy!! Change it please or I ban you!!!!
|
|
|
Post by Silverstar on May 13, 2008 17:28:52 GMT 9
Sorry again it was late and i was tierd when i typed that i wasnt consentrating
|
|
|
Post by Firestar on May 17, 2008 17:17:05 GMT 9
look, just fix it
|
|